| "Kaoru's Birthday Present" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 17:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
It lacked detail to it. If you write another one, put more detail. Like, is kenshin's hair up. What are they wearing and their emotions. Kay? Just some constructive critism.
|
Reviewed By: ill-fated solitude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 00:08 CST
Comment/Review:
This story was really to the point but it lacked depth. "Yes, we're in love. Now let's go have sex." Wouldn't Kenshin have more turmoil within himself?
|
Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Legato Luver On: March 05, 2004 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I love Rurouni Kenshin! and this fanfic was sooooo sweet! OH! and I just had to tell you, I love Ten Thousand Maniacs! I've been listening to them since I was five. ^_^ buh-bye!
|
Reviewed By: Chibi Mehtos (never logged in) On: February 07, 2004 22:22 CST
Comment/Review:
The shirt's a gi. And the the story is WAFFy. Perfect. ^_^x
|
Title: duh
Reviewed By: ??? On: November 04, 2003 21:33 CST
Comment/Review:
its a gi
|
Reviewed By: LionHeart823 On: October 16, 2003 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I think I like you your cool.As for the shirt it is called a gi.Believe me I know. The fic was throughly entertaining.I love it! Just like I love Rurouni Kenshin! @o@x ORO!!!
|
Reviewed By: tt43 On: October 03, 2003 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: L.O.S.S. On: November 09, 2002 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Thsi one is cute... and true to form the way the characters act and all. and the "shirt" is called a gi. |
Reviewed By: Firuze Khanume [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Realmente una forma interesante de describir como 'rompieron el hielo'... hehehehe. Le va muy bien al caracter de Kaoru, de tomar el toro por las hastas...
Espero nuevos trabajos tuyos! |
Reviewed By: Trancos On: April 02, 2002 15:15 CST
Comment/Review:
It was very cute.By the way, I think that the shirt is called gi. |
Reviewed By: Oshin On: April 01, 2002 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's a cool fic, not presumptious or serious, but fun to read for hardcore KK fans.(like me) |
Reviewed By: DFourthHorseman [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, but I'm wondering if that's the end? I'm guessin it is, but I think you can actually extend it by adding like a date between them and wedding, you know romance with a touch of RK humour, though I guess you can do another fic for that. Umm anywyz, great story. |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey that was excellent. I enjoyed the way it seemed to ballance out |
