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"Code Lyoko E79: Angel of Death" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: DevinS  On: June 25, 2006 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty dark, and twisted, with Yumi... I can't wait to read your next story, it's already up. This story is dark, will it set the tone for the rest of the episodes?
 Reviewed By: Garfie2000  On: June 14, 2006 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, dark, waaaaaaaay dark. I can't believe you did that, I mean, William... And what will happen to Yumi? Doing what she did before William... And now that it happened, poor Yumi, but the group is going to be messed up over this.
 Reviewed By: Famouf Amof  On: June 14, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
You screwed some things up, at the end "Yumi held on to Yumi"? Fix it, other then a few mistakes it is a great story, and will Yumi do it? Can't wait for the next story!

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