| "Eden" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't help but come back to this fic when I'm bored with all other fics. This pairing, and your idea for this fanfiction, is so unbeatable. I mean, to continue with the cardgame's results like tons of psychotic yaoi fangirls wanted (me being one of them) is completely genius. Because even though I wondered so often what would've happened, I don't have the brainpower or creativity to actually make a fanfic about it. So I'm grateful =] Also, this is one of my favorite lemony-action-fictions that I've ever read-- yaoi or not. So, yey!
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Reviewed By: Rzeta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so damn wicked! Luv the ending. My mind was screaming, "omg! Hisoka saw it?!!? Damn!" Was all that lovemaking locked up in ya mind till it burst out? Dunno where you got your insipiraton and perspiration to execute such an excellent fic!
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is I love you XD Yea, I was totally pissed when Tsuzuki and Muraki's little tryst was held up by a certain SOMEONE in the series. So needless to say, I believe your version of the results of the card game should be inputted instead of the interruption. Great stuff! And I love the drama-rama in the end, it really does end the whole thing with something to think about. So all in all, I loved it! Yay for you!!
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Reviewed By: Soichido On: November 22, 2006 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I was so mad when he saved him from the card game!! Agh!! Hehehehe! Can I have my cookie now?
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Reviewed By: sakikochan On: October 11, 2006 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I am one of those people who wondered what would have happened... My favorite part was the twist at the end...Hisoka spying. It just added the perfect little something. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Desire-After-Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 18:25 CDT
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I could think of nothing more to say but, "Wow", such as Tsuzuki. ** wink ** Well, I must say... that was amazing!! I could not of done a better job myself... seriously.. = )
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: July 11, 2006 20:32 CDT
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Finally, someone spelled throes as in throes of passion correctly! You have no idea how much that thrills my soul. Well written and an excellent read. Thank you.
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