Title: Wow, that was really good!
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chah! Yun-chan is my hero! I wish he would say something like that to Akito in the real Furuba. 'Now let's all feel sorry for Akito because he's DYING!' Hee hee, that was so unbelievebly awsome! ^_^ Kyon-chan is SOOOOO kawaii! And so kind too. I think that Kyon-chan and Yun-chan could get along if they really tried. They should be BEST FRIENDS! They're so cute together, not as a couple of course, but they make really cute friends. I absolutely hate Akito, I hate him more than anything or anyone that I've ever hated, I hate him more than anyone, fictional or non-fictional. But I still have to admit that that was a wonderful fic, beautifully written and a spectacular story idea. I think it would be a little creepy if Yun-chan got along so well with Akito like that, (It was like a special Fruits Basket episode of The Twilight Zone.) But it would make me happy, I would be a little freaked out at first but it would make Yun-chan much happier. And that would be nice. Kyah! You're such a great writer! Keep writing FB fics foreverrrr!
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