| "The prince of fire" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: dragoon-tyjet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad start. There are a few facts that are out of place, but otherwise its a really good begining. Keep it up. Oh and the facts that are out are the Name of The Yodamine. It was Arashi. The otehr is that the Kyubi isn't lord or te underworld. He is just a magical fox demon with nine tails, and an ubelieveable amount of Chakra.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon. this fic is good.
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Title: ruff rider for life
Reviewed By: rough rider for life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 17:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o yea and nyce fanfic
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_man not loged in On: July 23, 2006 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think it should be a naruto/hinata paring because well i havent see one in such awhile and they make the perfect paring but any way thats just what i think any way update soon your stories i can telll are going to get better regardles of the parings.=)
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Reviewed By: kitsuna ~not logged on, too lazy~ On: July 22, 2006 13:34 CDT
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I vote for Naruto/Tenten. Don't know why but i always loved that pairing. This is good so far, keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: BigSisterOf4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 10:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I vote for Naruto/Sasuke. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: darkprince32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 19:48 CDT
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naruto/hinata sounds good, ino sucks, update NOW
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 16:25 CDT
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Naruto x Ino is not what most people is looking for. now you have a reason to update. cuz here is your first review. :D
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