| "Couple Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 15:29 CDT
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At least there's one couple that's happy. Good job on writing it and finishing it!
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 20:12 CDT
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Well well well, and ending...interesting ending, and the new pairing sounds funny. and sorry if my reviews get shorter and shorter, because not only do i have a story writers block, but i also have a reviewing writers block, dang it sucks...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:23 CDT
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i do!
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 12:55 CDT
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Thanks, I loved that song by Panic! And this chapter, too! And even though you might not get that much reviews, I also will review! You should end it as Naruto and Hinata getting together and Sakura and Kiba getting together. I don't think Sasuke should go with Sakura.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord(forgot to signin) On: June 26, 2007 20:46 CDT
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u...didnt remember my screen name? -_- just freaking great. and srry i didnt read ur second to last chapter till now, i got side tracked from this site for a while. so, good chapter anyway. i should review for the last chapter too...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 16:12 CDT
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Thanks! I wanna know what's gonna happen at the party.
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 11:04 CDT
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IT'S NOT MY FALT THAT I FELL ASLEEP! i was sleepy and you were igonoring me! so XP. anyway, hury up with the next chaper ^_-
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 14:33 CST
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Oh and sorry about reviewing again, but i wanted to say i was DRAGONCOREY and i had to change my name... so yeah... I just noticed that you used my idea, in your own way, for chapter 16. Thanks! anyway good story and yadda yadda yadda ok later.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 14:29 CST
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your doing a really good job with this, but i say you add a little more drame to the Naruto, Hinata, Sasuke, and Sakura thing. i wonder how Naruto will get out of this? Makes me think, because not only does he hate Sakura now, but Hinata hates him, this WOULD be complicated if it wasnt for my great understanding of stuff like this, so i can follow easily, no offense to anyone. Well keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 01:58 CST
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gack! have you nateiced that my new ward is Gack instead off Blop! >.< anyway, i'm going to help you with the next caoie, how about Sasuke punches Naruto and the Sakura relizes that he like's her, nd then she starts to like them both! ok thats my idea. byes
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 19:30 CST
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Use my ideas that I mention in another review!!
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 17:14 CST
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use those ideas!!!!! there osem! anyway, uplode soon, and now you can't say that you can't think of anything, becouse you have 2 great ideas now!
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Title: Idea
Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok..Sakura needs help with something, and she asks Naruto. She needs help moving the couch or something. She falls on top of him, and she kisses him. The door is open and Sasuke is walking by and sees them. He then goes and tells Hinata. Hinata confronts Naruto and yeah..continue from there...
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 10:28 CST
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Hmmmmm i have an idea: Naruto is walking home when he notices Sakura crying on a bench(fake crying) and he asks wat is wrong and she says that Kiba dumped her and yadda yadda yadda something about him trying to comfort her and then she makes her move and i dont care if u make her suceed at that. And if u do have her suceed then have Hinata remember like having something of Naruto's and she is going to return it and on the way she sees them, i just thought of that and MAN THAT SOUNDS MEAN...I LIKE IT PUHAHAHAHAHAHA i dont care if u use it though but i came up wit this even though i am a Naru/Hina fan oh well we cant always hve it the way we want. But try to still keep on a Naru/Hina basis... OH and Sasuke should see it too and get even more jealous(if u went wit her suceeding) and then Hinata runs away and Naruto follows then Sakura notices Sasuke and he acts natural like he's walking. Then she says hi and he sits next to her and trys to talk to her and again i dont care if u have him get Sakura its ur choice but let me say this... DAMN I'M GOOD...well i said that cause i thought my idea was good but u dont have to use it just upload.
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Title: wat taking an update
Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
come one wat taking the update if you have a writing block ask the fans for help and this is me, cory, and cool dude, srry about those 2 reviews at the same time but if u need ideas just ask me i have a story
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