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Reviewed By: It's A Secret *smiles* On: January 01, 2007 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this fic is one of the best fics I have ever read. It's funny and loving and it makes me feel warm inside(in a happy way). It's a awesome fic and to tell ya the truth, I don't really read/particularily like yaoi fics but when I read this, I was blown away. It's that good and I hope you update soon because I can't wait to read the rest. Keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: kotay3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is the best FAKE fic I've ever had the pleasure to read.( read it throug in one go before reviewing)It's wellwritten and has beautiful charactizations. I love the way yar developping he charachters without making them ooc, and well, a dominant Randy is always hot^^ The proposal was one of the sweetest and most romantic ever! Looking forward to the next update!
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Title: AHHHH!!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 23:08 CST
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STUPID SITE!!!!!!! It just deleted my WHOLE review!!!!! *cries* Now I have to rewrite it...>< Oh well...from the beginning then. *ahem* FINALLY I'M REVIEWING! Holy crap, sorry for the wait! I've been so fucking busy. With college and work I've hardly had any time on the comp except for algebra work..ICK! And when I have free time, my dad's on here doing his Ebay shit. GAHHHHHHH! Well I finally have a moment since it's real late lol. OH-MY-FUCKING-GOD that was the best Dee/Ryo proposal I have ever read. I nearly cried I was so happy for them!! ^___^ I hope the wedding's soon. Can't wait to read it. Oh I loved the 'coupons' btw. Adorable!!! I want some of those too!! LOL Another great chapter as usual. I'm so sorry I didn't review sooner. I will try harder though, k? I can't wait to read about what happens next!!! Keep up the excellent work FAKEmpregnator!!!!!!!
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Title: Breathtaking
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY I'M REVIEWING! Holy crap, sorry for the wait! I've been so fucking busy >
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 13:57 CST
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*smiles* as usual it has made me even more interested. I wonder how they are going to get through this!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, u have blown me away with this story. Everything is so detailed. I LOVE it! Settling sounds so painful T_T...I'm so glad Dee got through with it and had Ryo for support ^^. Btw, the ring for Dee sounds gorgeous. I can't wait to read about his reaction...which will be soon right?? I hope so. Anyway, love how Ryo is getting REALLY protective over Dee. He almost beat the crap out of JJ! I almost felt sorry for JJ....notice how I said almost LOL. Three chapters to read took me a bit, with college and work, but I did it and I am thrilled. U have me hooked u know. I'm gonna have to stick with this story til the very end =P! Excellent work as usual FAKEmpregnator. I can't wait as usual til the next update! Good luck with ur writing!!!!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was a quick update! Made my day =P! So Dee and Ryo get to go home. Good for them ^^. And Dee quit smoking?! Amazing...lol. So Ryo is going to have his way with Dee soon? Can't wait to read that!! Another great chapter as usual. U never disappoint. As usual, I can't wait til the next chapter! *is excited* Hope u get to update again soon!!!! Until the next chapter, Ja Ne!! ^_^
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Title: Perfect!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter from one of my favorite FAKE fanfic authors! I'm so happy u updated! I've been waiting for this!!! lol Diana seems so curious about their sex life but hey, who isn't? ^^ So far so good with them. I hope everything turns out ok in LA. But Ryo will be there to take care of Dee no matter what ^_^. They are so in love it makes me smile while reading this! I hope there will be a lemon soon. I loved ur last one! As I've said before, u write so well and with emotion. It keeps me addicted to ur story =P. Well, keep up the great work! I can't wait til the next chapter! I'm so excited! Hope u update soon! Ja ne and good luck FAKEmpregnator!!!!!
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Title: Ur Amazing!!!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! U have no idea. I check my email everyday and hope to God that there's an update from u. It's very difficult for some writers to keep the FAKE characters in character. Some see them in a different light then what they truly are. U have gotten everything correct. If Sanami Matoh ever wrote a FAKE manga like this, I truly believe it would be something like this. Anyway, on to the last chapter u wrote. I'm so glad Dee and the baby are ok. I'd cry if something bad happened lol (Loves Dee so much). Now that Ryo and Dee are back together, I can't wait to see what happens next! They are so much in love!!! Also, I CAN'T WAIT til Ryo is gonna proposes to Dee!! I can't wait til u update!! I hope it's soon!! Good luck with this story. I hope u stick with it. U r such a good writer!! Until next time, Ja ne!!! Also: Why aren't there more reviews? Good God ppl! Show some respect here! This author deserves more reviews for her work! DO IT NOW!!! :P
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Title: Speechless
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 15:53 CDT
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I've been reading your fic for a while and decided to stop being stubborn and review. This is really REALY good fic. Like. . . .I"M SERIOUS!! Oh, My , Gosh!! I wish I could write this well!! And, you update more often then many writers. I can not wait until the next chapter comes up. Will Dee be alright?
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Reviewed By: abbyz j On: August 24, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED it it was a fab fic lol
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...This is excellent. I've encountered very few mpreg FAKE fics before and I have got to say this is the best written one I have came across. You've even managed to keep all the characters "in character" which is hard for some authors. I can tell Dee and Ryo are very much in love. Even Dee and Bikky have a good relationship which is rare in many fics. I'm also impressed with how you explained how males can get pregnant. Very clever. You are very talented and I hope to be seeing more updates with this story. Good luck! Ja ne ^^
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Title: Impressed
Reviewed By: Kita&Subu-chan On: July 29, 2006 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee! That was so great. You have to update soon! *drools* Please. I want more! (Yes, yes, no that we have that out of the way, I have to say I was truly impressed. I don't mind MPREG fics, though they're seldom my favorites. But this one was well thought out and very nicely done. Ryo and Dee were very in-character and the "carrier" bit was very neatly explained and thought out. I was impressed and will happily read more.) Kawaii! Subu-chan liked it too! Drinks for everyone! It's a party! Hey, Drake, JJ, stop making out in the corner and get over here! Party! (Down, rabid-fan-girl! Back!)
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Reviewed By: hoppA On: July 02, 2006 15:34 CDT
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I really really like it !!!...please update soon its an excelent fic
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Reviewed By: hnbgvfcx On: June 25, 2006 23:36 CDT
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That was unexpected. xD I was just waiting for a Dee mpreg, thank you.
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