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| "Night of the Demon Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Anorexic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2002 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic a lot, and think you did an awesome job on it (although I'm spoiling the end of the series for myself). Makoto and Ai were really well portrayed, just like little kids would act (especially leaving the three bags in for thirty minutes).
Impmon's reflections were my favorite part of this fic though. It's neat seeing a former bad guy realize what would have happened had he remained that way.
Not giving more than ten on SoW or O/C, but that's just me. Almost never give tens, although this one probably deserved it. It's kind of sad how the good fics get ignored while some really poorly written ones are getting a lot of attention.
AC | Reviewed By: Cheshire cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2002 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! I just love lil' Impmon! Great job! You're a magnificent writer! I love your fics! ^_^ By the by, SilvorMoon, you wouldn't mind if I drew a cuple of pic.s of the scenes I liked from this and post 'em up in the art section, hmm? (Of caurse I'll put in my comment/artist note where I got the cute scenes from) I think they'll be cute. :) Nice work! |
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