| "The love of our song" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: omg!!!
Reviewed By: MATTE TRINGHAM On: July 24, 2006 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've never seen a al fanfic. im an al fangirl so i loved it! write more write more!- chickensruleovertheworld@earthlink.net
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix (Not Logged In) On: July 09, 2006 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry, wrong email address. ^_^;; flamephoenixrising@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix (Not Logged In) On: July 09, 2006 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have a great character developement going with Sky and her sister Lily, but there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. You should consider getting a beta. I'd be willing to help you out. If you're interested, contact me via email-- katiecat71@aol.com.
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Reviewed By: Mian(not logged in) On: July 05, 2006 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I like your story. Actually, I'm an Ed fangirl but I think you should, of course, focus on Sky and Al more than on Lily and Ed. It's hard to find Al fanfictions. My friend, an Al fangirl who doesn't go online very often, has been begging me to find an Al fanfiction for her. So, thanks for writing this and getting her off my back.
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Title: like
Reviewed By: kate222 On: July 02, 2006 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like i really like!!! but it was so short!!!!! thou i did like it!!! keep adding! well if you want to. i really liked it!!! 10!10!10!10!10!10!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
good so far, just one thing.Trying writing in 1st person, (ex. I did this, I did that) might be easier to understand.. im not flaming u, just trying to give some good advice :)
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