| Reviewed By: Kik On: January 19, 2005 12:50 CST|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
This is one interesting fic. But I got easily confused with where everyone was all at the same time. You need to distinguish that. But then again this must be a style of writing I've never seen before. This is good, I have to admit that so update soon.