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| "Code Lyoko 81: X Re-Done" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Garfie2000 On: June 30, 2006 17:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
At the end, the Help Me... Was it Franz? Also, I like how you hint at the other version of this story, when Franz says he knew he should have possessed Yumi instead. But he didn't, and that one little fact keeps the story going!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Famouf Amof On: June 30, 2006 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here I thought it was over... ALthough you messed up at the end. "I saw him kill her" it's the other way around. Also, great writing still, and the originallity, well, you pretty much used 81 but changed one thing, you even hint to it in this story, amazing writing! Sucks you have to take a break though, let me guess, Summer vacation?
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