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| "Black Wings Of Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: hiro1104 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it so far hope you update
| Reviewed By: Kage_ken On: July 31, 2006 16:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm interesting story although i dont no how naruto would start to work for the 'evil' side with out noing it, that fact kinda escapes me but hey im not the writer and i have no clue what ur gonna write. all i can do is hope that its as good as your begining. umm a little fact, putting black wings of chaos in bold and underlined is making it in to an eyesoar so when you put in the next couple chappies dont do it please. anyways i have no other coplanits so, ja ne
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