| "Of Alchemists and Shinobi: The Broken Law" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Sephy10
Reviewed By: Naruto's girl On: July 30, 2006 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Style of writing was kind of confusing to at first but then I started to get it, the reason why it was kind of confusing at first is because you didn't say when it either Ed's pov or Al's pov. All I have to say to the Spelling is grammer is that it is excellent! and for the Originality and Creativity part: I really like how you did the plot with Naruto and Ed living together that was kind of funny! anyway Im really enjoying this story and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: anime_gal1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
U should add a border or a line so people know when it's Al POV and when it is Ed's POV.Other then that this fic isn't half bad!Update soon please.UPDATE soon!!!!
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Title: Weeeeeeeiiiiiiiiird
Reviewed By: Neji Hyuuga On: July 09, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a funny fanfic,but it was weird.
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 16:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
adding to my last review u forgot to put FMA in the anime section.
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 12:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
i'm getting confused here. why is there two Ed (or Eds)in the story. i'm really confused and i don't remember Naruto's apartment that dirty. in fact in the first ep it looked pretty clean and if it wasn't clean before it would be hard to keep it clean years after.
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