| "Cat's Crossing" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 17:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Basically the exact same complements i put in my other reviews...... I am reviewing because my comp isn't ill anymore ;3 I love cats...... I want a cat, but my mom won't let me get one...... I don't really like dogs because of an incident a while ago that resulted in five shots for me...... Dogs don't like me...... -_-'
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Reviewed By: digger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok only one major problem that i can see is shampoo's chinese name. her name is xian pu not shan pu. other than that good fic. it is kinda clear that you don't know much about the ranma universe. xian pu actually went to japan twice. the first time she was going to kill ranma's female form. after her failure she went back to china and informed the elders about the jusenkyo curse. the second time is after she has been cursed. the best thing that you could do for this story is tell us where it falls in the timeline of both animes. keep up the good work.
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