| "Who Said All was Fair in Love and War" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: mishizzle trizzle On: July 13, 2006 20:41 CDT
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"Stop or I'll shoot………&aci rc;€¦..cuz I have a gun……….and it shoots………&ac irc;€¦.and it could stop you……….and you don't want that……becauseâ€&brvba r;……like…&ac irc;€¦..who wants to be stopped?" said Robin.-------------hahah you took it! lol. are u gonna use that line for every teen titans story??? lol.
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Reviewed By: fong shway On: July 11, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naturally, she licked on it.----------hahhahah nice mess up. buhh good job on the chapter... ^_^ ching chong u rock. sorry i couldn't come ova
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Reviewed By: mishizzletran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 20:08 CDT
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hehhehehehe i read ur biography... i just sneezeed... ewwww snot! lol. keeep on updating yo. ^_^_^_^_^__^ chinggity chonhg chong ching
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Reviewed By: chingggittty chong chong On: July 07, 2006 19:17 CDT
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"Star?" he asked, squinting to see clearly (from afar.)---------------- hahahahah awesome chapter!
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Reviewed By: mishizzletran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 01:32 CDT
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awwww cuteeeeeeee i like chapter four. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH ROBIN KISSED HER.... OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH STARFIRE DUNNOOO.. lol. KEEEP ON UPDATING. urrr thhhhhuper. ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: mishizzletran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 01:24 CDT
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FUNNIESSS:::: "Dude, it's the mall! That's like the best place ever!" he exclaimed out of no where. "Yeah, it is," said Alison. --------------------------------------------------- "Wait…she owns the Jones Manor of 28th?" asked Robin "She Gary Jones's dau…" "Dude, they already explained it," said Beast Boy. -------------------------------------------------- hahhahaha good job!!!! uuuuuuuuuuuu sooooooooo funnnnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyy!
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Reviewed By: mishizzletran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 01:17 CDT
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all i have to say is in chapter 2 and 1... slade sounds like a rapist... lol. is he? i'm scared.
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Reviewed By: mishizzletran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 01:09 CDT
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urrr thuuper hehehehheh good job A to the M to the B to the ERLE hehehhehe ima dork i know GOOD JOOOOOOOOOOOB ur a WAAAAAAAY better author than i am ^_^_^^_^_^ but i make a WAAAAAAAAAAAAY better draweerrerere than you i think???? ok now i'm not sure.... lol.
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