| "Change of heart of a player" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: InuKagz_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 20:00 CDT
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plz plz plz update i luv this fic!
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 18:56 CDT
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Love it cool playa pimp ( inuyasha) so does he have a disguise on or somtin if he does not let anibodi know that he is hanyou , and will he let kagome know . And how come he blushes he is a playa . well wat can u say when it come to kagome she is so gorgious i wish i looked like her , but don't mind me please update soon love the story wat will happen next and stop talkin at the begiinig of tha story and get down to the point the story is good butt short chappie i love ur work just get down to busines.' Bre`Auna'
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 19:32 CDT
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D.N Angels is a hecka good show.Kagome is making the biggest player in school blush that's funny!Lol!^@^
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 04:14 CDT
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Awesome story but your first chapter was a little to short. It looked more like a summery but it is still a good start since it is your first fanfiction. Ok well if you need any advice email me.
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