Reviewed By: silver/dog midnight/raven sess/kag#1fan On: September 01, 2006 14:45 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: is there a reason this story is not finished yet. i will find you,and beat the words out of you bud remember it!!!!
Reviewed By:daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 00:41 CDT Comment/Review: I think this story has a lot of potential if you develop the relationship slowly. Don't make them too OOC Kagome would have said something about him calling her bitch and ordering her around....but the couple is totally doable as long as you don't rush their relationship! I'm adding this to my favorites to keep up with the updates! Update soon!!!
