| "In The Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: grlanime13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
iT WAS GREAT IT REALLY SOUNDED LIKE SOMETHING NEJI WOULD SAY AND DO PLPLZPLZPLZ WRITE A SEQUEL I WOULD LOVE TO READ IT PEOPLE WRITE TO MUCHABOUT SASUSAKU AND THATS BORING NEJITENTEN IS WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY BETTER
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Title: Itachi of the Akatsuki
Reviewed By: itachioftheakatsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs grammar work. Please update.
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Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 18:23 CST
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*tackles*VERY GOOD BUN-BUN! that was good and funny too! when i FINALLY put something out dont forget to check mine!
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 21:18 CST
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I LOVE IT (you sould write a sequle of lee and rin [wink winlk]) anyway, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: luv012 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 23:41 CST
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hahaha! lee has a crush!! X ) this is such a cute fanfic. though not as good as the ones on www.fanfiction.net, but still really good. keep up the good work
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Title: ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........
Reviewed By: LunaEstrella [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE YOU!!!!!!! Don't make naruto gay!!!!!!!!!!!you know2 what i don't care because now Neji is going tgo be gay and it's all your fault! so ha! take that! Oh and Ihope you trip and die! notice it's not crash and burn. Its trip and die! Die tenten! Die! Okay, happy? I reviewed for ya. and it's noty almost a 100 so stop faking it! and lieing! also................TACO!!
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Reviewed By: Goth Angel848 On: November 27, 2006 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! I wish it didn't have to end so soon! Neji and Tenten really are great together!
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! SQUEL SQUEL! I HAVE TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS! HURRY! I WANT THE ENDING! AND PLEASE MAKE A SQUEL!
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 21:35 CST
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uhhh, just so yew noe, Geany 101 is dislexic(sp?) and she meant she wants a sequel >.< Anyway! LOVE IT! You're an awesome author! And you totally rocked the story! Good job. And you actually finished a story! I can't do that >.< Couple trouble has 3 sequels and we havent even finished the first T-T That's gonna take forever. Wowzerz. I'm glad Neji and Tenten got together! Whoo-hoo! Yay! Okee okee. Come up with another story soon! 'Cause you're good at this! Tell meh if there's any way to contact yew, kk?? If yew ever need help from meh just ask in a review for one of my stories. Awesome last chapter! You finished strong, leaving us with the whole Lee x Rin thing. So peace out. Mrs. Hatake!
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 17:16 CST
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lol, nice chapter, it's was kinda sad, and i wanta segule! i love your story, hope you up date soon! bye.
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Reviewed By: Goth Angel848 On: October 17, 2006 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, chapter 12 is up!! Thank Dark Luna, you rule! Please keep writing I'm addicted now...
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Reviewed By: Black Rose317 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool
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Reviewed By: James Paisley On: October 11, 2006 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your in the springtime of youth
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Reviewed By: Black Rose317 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories getting better Tenten. See you later. -Hinata^.^
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Reviewed By: guy 498 On: October 04, 2006 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was good but it could have been better but I really liked it so please write more pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeeeeee. There was a few spelling and grammatical errors. I loved it so again pleeeaaaaaassee write more.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 23:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome! that chapi was hecka good! i can tell ur improving! and the fanfic is really devoloping so i give u props! lmao! anyway keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Goth Angel848 On: October 01, 2006 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I used to think love sucked.UNTIL I read your fanfic about Neji and Tenten.It's so beautiful. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, WRITE THE NEXT ONE, I'LL DIE WITHOUT IT!!!! And because this couple is about the only one in the world that doesn't suck.After all even I need SOMETHING to look forword to in my life.
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Reviewed By: Alone393 On: October 01, 2006 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason this fanfic RULES to me is because I always LOVE reading stories like this and the Neji and Tenten couple ALWAYS has a soft spot in my heart. I only saw maybe 2-3 typo's.
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Title: forgot to login
Reviewed By: Isabell/ spookygal On: October 01, 2006 11:39 CDT
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I like this story. I like this story so much that I hope you will update soon. If I were in Neji's shoes I would have beaten the shit out of that guy but then again I am a girl so yeah.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 02:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww dangit! i'm jealous! u have more reviews than i do for 'Couple Trouble'!! [sighs] w/e, oh right good job, funny chapter! lol, haha wellll keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, O_O, that was funny, the dog bit lee, lol, up date soon, please
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Reviewed By: tenten On: September 12, 2006 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE! I HAVE NOTHIN BETTER TO DO IN MY COMPUTER CLASS CMON! I LOVE NEJITEN FICS!!!!IM 14 IN NEW MEXICO AND I DEMAND THAT U MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: forgot to login
Reviewed By: lisa/supernaturalchic1 On: September 10, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was so so. please update soon. p.s.I put my fanfic on the site. come see it. warning:tentenxoccness
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Reviewed By: spookygal On: September 10, 2006 13:53 CDT
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thanks for updateing i can't wait to see the next chapter. this story is awsome.
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Reviewed By: supernaturalchic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The part where Neji was screaming don't cut my hair was SSSSsssssssoo funny!
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Reviewed By: supernaturalchic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so FUNNY! *laughs* but I wonder...what ever happened to "Three Again"?
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Reviewed By: supernaturalchic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it and I could just picture in my head as I read it! 10/10! (P.s. It's me, Lisa)
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: spookygal On: August 26, 2006 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
i demand that you update as soon aas possible!!!:>
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 01:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey i didnt say u had bad grammar i jus said (in a diff way) that theres always room for improvment, u read my fic look how diff chapter 1 is from the latest chapter (lol i've forgotten) anyway seriously good job nd dont think u have bad grammar! that makes me feel bad for making u feel bad. anyway keep up the good work ^_^
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Title: I loved it
Reviewed By: LunaEstrella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it But tell me what she forgot!! oh and I'm reviewing for naruto. Don't slap my baby!!!! or I'll eat neji.
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