| "Spirit Gate" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Name?
Reviewed By: rose whip lash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Umm... I happened to notice that you had Kurama say his name was "Kurama Minamino", but Youko Kurama is his demon name, his human name is Shuichi Minamino. He would probably give either one, depending on the situation, but I don't think he would give a combination. o_O
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 01:50 CST
Comment/Review:
are you still working on this? I hope sp. it looks good
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Title: SPIRIT GATE
Reviewed By: Ash vixen On: July 16, 2006 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
because we lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv...Fma and yyh. you is so uber good!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I would love to write a proper response, but the fact is that there is really nothing there to review. Your syntax and grammar are accurate. But that's all I can say. You should have at least finished the introductions. That being said, I'll keep my eye on this fic, as your other works have been pretty good.
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