| "Torn Between Lives" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Allie On: July 12, 2002 18:01 CDT
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hey i like the story but the last chapter i think maybe is for a different story your writing, so do me a favor and check it out thanks |
Reviewed By: san On: June 18, 2002 11:46 CDT
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hi, hope you will soon update!!!!! PLEASE do it!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 19, 2002 14:51 CDT
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1 word.....UPDATEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 13, 2002 17:56 CDT
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I hope frezza and zarbon dont do any yaio or any thing nasty like that to vegeta !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That would just be plain nasty!!!!!!!!!! Update ASAP!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 13, 2002 09:12 CDT
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UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 12, 2002 17:11 CDT
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The chapters A night the club and Anniversary are the same thing........................... Update! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 11, 2002 19:31 CDT
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love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 10, 2002 14:18 CDT
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You must UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 08, 2002 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Update ASAP!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 07, 2002 20:30 CDT
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Love IT!!!!! I just dont like the fact that krillen is a sayen. But it is still eally good!!! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Keruseyu_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FULL MARKS FOR YOU!!! luvved the beginning, i cant wait for you to update, just tell me when you do!!! ^_^! |
