| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shiarra [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's a ribbon-seal-youkai I looked for it but it didn't have a find on Google. Your stories are so great! Please update soon
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Reviewed By: EJA Roberts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 00:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sue! long time no write. I just finished reading P4, P5, and P6. Got to say, they were awesome!!!!!!! i know, i know, if they were so awesome then why didn't i review? well i don't usually read logged on, and the times i tried to review it said i had to be logged on, and i do not get a lot of time online and logging in then refinding the story is a pain in the butt. anyway, like i said the stories are awesome and i'm actually kinda sad i finished them, now what am going to read? This story is already sounding soooooo good, and its soooo hard to wait for an update. The Faury tale is also awesome and i'm glad things are a little happier in that chapter, it was soo dark hopeless. Just like desiturium is right now. Any hint as to when it's gonna start getting better for inu and kag? And on this story, what is the deal with that youkai family? Anyway, love the story can't wait for an update, keep writing, because the world will colapse if you stop. My world anyway.
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just a quick question. is the text in the journal simply written phonetically in the native american languages or is there actually a word for like say "youkai" or "DNA structure" now that i think about it it seems kinda obvious that it might be phonetic but it doesn't hurt ro ask, right?
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 14:47 EDT
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Really good so far. It was great to see Miroku and Sango again. Cant wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 01:02 EDT
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Hmm... Bitty Belle's time to shine, right? I'm sure Dr. Griffin is such a meanie! Well, he's probably much older and wiser and more mature, so of course he wouldn't appreciate Isabelle coming on to him. They'd be the most hilarious mates!
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Reviewed By: MikoTen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 18:51 EDT
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Enjoying the newest Purity very much, Sue. Can't wait for more. Is Griffin obsessive/compulsive? Sorta seems that way from the way he was going about a few things(Towel straightening, hairbruch cleaning, etc). I'm obsessive/compulsive, and was just wondering :D
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 22:00 EDT
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Wow, Griffin doesn't like Isabelle. I wonder why? She doesn't seem that bad. I wait for the next chapter!
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Title: THe longest review i've ever written but i had to get it out!
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 11:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i'm on to you sueric, i know who griffin is!(kioshi), which is the only possible reason as to why you would start out in the past when sango and miroku was alive in sengoku jidai. it makes sense to show some sort of process. Avouchment: To declare the provable truth or validity of or to affirm; To accept responsibility for: action, to aknowelege. so i'm guessing that this story will be based somewhere along the line of this, but i wont delve to far into what i think just yet, i'll leave the unfolding of events to you because you do it so well. [smiles] tell me if i've got the right idea okay? i cant wait to see what you do with this story. and if i'm right on my assumptions thus far, it would be interesting to see how kagome and inuyasha react to the griffin/kioshi character. being that he knew sango and miroku and although shippou could of recall things to them it would be interesting to see things from someoine elses point of view. also now that i think of it, we dont see much of aiko and her family or shippou's either. for the most part we only see some of sesshoumaru, toga and gunnar. but i'm guessing you have a plan fro everything. you have a great way with transition, not just fgrom chapter to chapter, but from story to story they are all connected and i also noticed how you transitioned from japan to N. America it had a nice unifying effect and it makes everything more real too. you've ginven the inuyasha/ purity universe a government and laws with sesshoumaru as sort of supreme tai youlkai and then for other countries he has underlings or branches of other tai-youkais. this is something i've gathered from reading all of your stories and not just in the purity universe either but in ALL of them. i think it is really unique how you do this and that you have a true gift for story telling. i'm only 17 but if you ever wrote a book featuring your own base creation of characters i would love to illustrate it. (BIG SMILES) :D...update soon!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 02:54 EDT
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Dr. Griffin certainly isn't nice is he? Lol...I'm sure he'll warm up to Isabelle eventually lol.
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 16:56 EDT
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Interesting beginning... Let's all start in the past, eh? Kioshi, Kumiko, and Akira all seem like a happy family... Can't wait to see the true plot of this story!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:54 EDT
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a very eye catching beginning. bringing around miroku and sango was an excellent idea and unexpected. i'm interested to see where these characters lead their lives to, and how it intertwines into our beloved purity saga!! props to sue!
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Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as always Sue love your writing. However, please forgive me but I am a bit confused. Who are these children characters? Who are they related to ? Other than Shippo, the monk and sango, I was confused about who the characters are and who they are related to. Yup. I guess I am a bit slow and please forgive me for that. Please at sometime I hope you can explain who they are. thanks. J
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:24 EDT
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I'm already interested in this story. Wonderful beginning!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 00:27 EDT
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Here we go! *grins* I'm looking forward to this! It's nice to see a little Miroku/Sango! It's a burden when even the children see Miroku for what he is! Cursed hand? LOL. So he's still feeding Sango that line? O.o! And Kioshi! Sweet! I'm ready for some more please! Well done Sue! It's going to be good!
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