| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: evloner On: December 09, 2006 01:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got me wondering what happened in Griffiths past. I went back and re-read the first chapter and I'm guessing the young happy little boy with flowers placed in his hair by his little sister was griffit. Am I right? Now in this chapter Griffiths seems to have gone wild and possibly killed someone closed to him or witnessed someone closed to him die. Update as soon as you can. I can wait to you shed some light on griffith's past.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 17:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK I have to know wha tis going on with his past? Did he kill someone in her family? Or maybe he killed his mate or lover or child?? I have to know the suspence is KILLIN me!!!! *breathes heavily* ok now that I am calm I cant wait to find out about his past and what's up Dr. Avia. I dont trust him...I have a feeling that he is going to Jilli. OK That was all.
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Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay a new chapter! I am very intrigued by this story, the mystery of griffins past is just itching at me. i can't wait to find out. i love how every one calls isabelle bitty! its so cute! i like the little details like that, that you add into the story, it really makes it more real. Gavvie is soooo cute! he got flustered! lol jillie and gavvie really make a great couple though. hmmmm... i wonder when gunnar is gonna find himself a girl. okay, just thought i'd stop by and tell you that the story is awesomse! you're a great writer. =)thanks for the updates!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 13:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Now, I am really starting to wonder what happened to Griffin in the past. That was sweet of Bitty to decide to have Thanksgiving with Griffin! Now, lets see what happens with it. ^_^ Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 11:45 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 10:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while since I've left a heartfelt and not a gropie based review. So here goes... I find myself trying to compare myself to you as I write my fics, but you, Sueric really have something special it's something that I can only hope and pray to eventually achieve or maybe...maybe it's something that you were born with. I don't know really, I just know that you are spectacular at what you do. The way you're able to pull these characters out of mid air and give them such a life that even after the chapter is done...or the stories are finished you leave us readers still daydreaming..thinking about them as if they were real people. The way you're able to suck me in and make it so that I can't see past your words when I'm reading them... And on sleepless nights as I toss and turn in bed I find myself wondering over into the world of Purity and replaying the scences in my head as if it was a movie that I've seen... I know this is silly, but when I'm driving home from work or sitting in gridlock I find myself wondering what if...what if there was some alternate universe, where all theses characters actually lived? Well that would be just freaking brilliant, wouldn't it? When I die and I meet our maker, when he askes me what things I appreciated most while here on earth, I assure you one of those things will be the amazing writings of a faceless gifted woman that goes by the name of Sueric. I don't know Sue, now that I thinking about it, maybe aiming to be like you is like trying to stop the sun from rising or shooing the clouds away on a rainy day, or maybe just maybe as long as I have someone like you to compare myself to that means I'll keep improving and bettering myself. Whatever it is, I'm glad I found you. I don't want you to look at this reveiw as if I'm sucking up, or as a payment for a new chapter, because it's not. I just wanted you to know that sometimes something as small and insignificant as fanfiction can really have a big effect of someone's ordinary little life. Keep doing what you do and I'll keep reading. Simonkal of Inuy
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 03:56 EST
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Hmm....a quite Thanksgiving day with Griffin, sounds somewhat romantic, if the cards are played right lol.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 02:04 EST
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Awwwwwwwwwwr! Poor Griffin! He's so lost he doesn't know which way to turn. And Isabelle... Bwhahahahahahahahahahahahaha! She'll never live down the size of her ass... with that chair!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 09:42 EST
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Great chapter! I really thought that they were gonna kiss at the end. I was cheering them on, then the darn dog had to go and ruin the moment. I was glad to see that Gunnar was in this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: evloner On: December 04, 2006 22:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good and more gunner too. You give such great detail, its so easy to picture in my mind all that's happening. I just love your writing. If I every decide to become a writer I hope to mimic your style.
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Title: omg...
Reviewed By: charity nicole On: December 04, 2006 20:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh.. why did he walk away??? i wanted to see him soften up just a little more! * sigh* oh well maybe later right? i just love this secret feeling hiding thingy going on .. it seems like so much fun.... Ooh.. well keep up the good work and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 20:34 EST
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Griffin, you ass! He should have still kissed her! That was just evil lol; I knew that was going to happen but it doesn't mean that it didn't make me mad lol.
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: December 04, 2006 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Loved the intensity of the descriptions. C
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Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly LOVED this chapter... this is my fav chapter so far in this story... it was well written... the suspense.. discription.. beautifully done... cant wait for the next chap... your keeping me on my toes!! laters!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I feel sooo sorry for the two of them......why can't Griffin see that he's in love???? Update soon please because I can't wait for more.
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