| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 16:56 EDT
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Interesting beginning... Let's all start in the past, eh? Kioshi, Kumiko, and Akira all seem like a happy family... Can't wait to see the true plot of this story!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:54 EDT
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a very eye catching beginning. bringing around miroku and sango was an excellent idea and unexpected. i'm interested to see where these characters lead their lives to, and how it intertwines into our beloved purity saga!! props to sue!
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Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as always Sue love your writing. However, please forgive me but I am a bit confused. Who are these children characters? Who are they related to ? Other than Shippo, the monk and sango, I was confused about who the characters are and who they are related to. Yup. I guess I am a bit slow and please forgive me for that. Please at sometime I hope you can explain who they are. thanks. J
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:24 EDT
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I'm already interested in this story. Wonderful beginning!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 00:27 EDT
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Here we go! *grins* I'm looking forward to this! It's nice to see a little Miroku/Sango! It's a burden when even the children see Miroku for what he is! Cursed hand? LOL. So he's still feeding Sango that line? O.o! And Kioshi! Sweet! I'm ready for some more please! Well done Sue! It's going to be good!
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