| Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 19:36 CDT|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
This was very well written! I love the narrative. I felt that you could have ended a bit stronger, but other than that, I loved it all the way through! Keep up the great work!