| "Sapphire" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Phe On: August 10, 2006 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
The plot's interesting and something I haven't seen done before; however... A lot of the characters are very OOC, and the story seems rather bare. Anything that's said is only the bare minimum to advance the plot, and there really isn't a lot of description. If you worked hard to advance those two weaknesses, though, I'm sure that this could become a brilliant story!
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Title: Keep It Goin
Reviewed By: Winry13092 On: August 10, 2006 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Your stories are sooo good and I LOVE them soo much!! But I think you should have more funny moments as well. Rain is sorta like a Mini-Mustang with the comments and I think thats great! Keep it goin!
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why...why...why did you stop?!?!?!?!!?!?? You r meking me mad!!! plz write more! PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ! okies i'm done...PLZ! now I am done
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: kate222 22 On: July 20, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it keep going!!!!!!!!!!!! it was really really really really really good!!!
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