| "Waiting Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 07:52 CDT
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I really liked the whole plot!! Great job!! P.S.- I am kinda curious to see if you made a sequel...I will go check that out now!
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Reviewed By: Fate of Awakening Love On: July 29, 2008 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Really good work on the story it was really wonderfull. Once again I loved the story, and while the whole 'Kags gets preg. & Inu leaves or doesnt kno till later bout the kid' ordeal has been done before your creativity, style, and originality gives this plot a whole new turn. Congrats. on a very outshining story. Much Love, Fate
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Reviewed By: Fate of Awakening Love On: July 29, 2008 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Really good work on the story it was really wonderfull. Once again I loved the story, and while the whole 'Kags gets preg. & Inu leaves or doesnt kno till later bout the kid' ordeal has been done before your creativity, style, and originality gives this plot a whole new turn. Congrats. on a very outshining story. Much Love, Fate
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 12:22 CDT
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this is a good story although a few things confused me. like why is there no mention of sess running the family business or working at all. all the problems kagome had with being a single mom including the fact that at least one girl kept harassing her for years, i mean if this story was set a few decades back that is one thing but you made it sound like a modern story and single mothers aren't that big of a deal, in my high school we probably had more teen moms than girls without kids and kagome losing jobs because she's a single mom, not only is it strange because employers dont care and it's also against the law. you also made this story sound like it takes place in the us (which is no problem) and then you mention in one spot that it is in japan which was a bit confusing. this was a great story and i did love it and hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: NightTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 06:31 CDT
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I loved your story! Are you shocked you're still getting reviews!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 11:51 CST
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OMFG i yell at the tv too lol i yell at the anime just as u do saying "WHY ISN'T SHE DEAD YET?!?!?!???!!??! DIE BITCH DIIEEEEEEEE!!!!!" well i loved the story awesome 1!!!!! ^-^ keep up your work and dont stop writing !!!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Cathrinity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 00:22 CDT
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YOu are a great writer. I already read what you had written for your second inyasha idea and was wondering if you could give me a better idea of what was going to happen in the inuyasha 1 idea and let me know if you ever wrote the one that was your third idea. thanks
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 23:35 CDT
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amazing story... i really loved it... great work... good job...
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Reviewed By: blacktime On: May 28, 2007 18:28 CDT
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great story, first time lemon was pretty gud
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 17:52 CDT
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that was beautiful. Keep writing, even the lemon was okay. *grins* good story.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want a seqeul!!! Kinky-hoe needs to die, and i want to know wat happens. great fic, i luv it. um... yea. c ya - #1 fan
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Reviewed By: Warah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i loved this story. The idea was great! You should definately do a sequel!
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i hate the ending of inuyasha series, i didn't even say if they defeaed naraku or who inu luv!!! Great chap!!!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 10:53 CST
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I'm glad that you took my advice to heart. It made the fic better for me to understand. I do hope that you make a sequel. I would like to find out how Miroku and Sango are doing as well as Kikyo and Naraku. And What about Sesshoumaru? Does he have a life?
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha...yeah i watched SCRYED a long time ago but I absolutely love it when Ryu calls out hom even though I spelled it a little differently here...but I liked the ending and I think you could have a sequel maybe with a few more kids and one along the way for Inuyasha and Kagome...sweet...but it was good and I will miss reading it...but I hope to read some more of your stories in the future...great job
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