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| "Good News for Ed" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: gunslinger-alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was awesome. seriously hilarious!im still in tears, thanks, i needed that pick up. the plot bunnies ruined my day. TT^TT by the way, i think u spelt alchemist wrong. ^^
| Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! that was just too funny! seriously, i was in near tears from attempting to suppress my laughter (i'm in a library =)). i just loved the last part where Roy tells Ed that he'll never get taller. that was just hilarious! i actually expected Ed to be lactose intolerant. i didn't know for sure. it was just a hunch. anyways, good work! keep it up. this is the first FMA fic i've read.
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