| "Seeds of Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Milton [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story u might want to raise the rating beacuse of the content though. update soon
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 01:04 CDT
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p.s. update soon
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 01:02 CDT
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well although i kinda find it desturbing that a girl the age of 11 is making advances on a guy the age of what 15 to 16, it is really well written so i have no complaints but please tell us if this is going to be NC-17 in later chapters cuz i have a feeling that although naruto has a strong will power when it comes to fights he doesnt seem to control the battle when it comes to women, ya no? anyways good fic and i didnt find any problems with it even though i wouldnt no a spelling error even if it bit me in the ass. so cya l8r
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Hokage On: July 21, 2006 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet story, totally rocks. That kiss from Tsunade reminds me of Misato and Shinji in the evengelion movie...........update soon
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Reviewed By: demonwolf6_6_6@yahoo.com On: July 19, 2006 00:01 CDT
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I realy like this story, it has a great start. Is this going to be NarutoxHanabi? Well anyway good job, also you should think about posting this on fanfiction.net.
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