| "When Dreams Fade" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Kanade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 06:05 CDT
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Beautiful writing, i loved it 'till the end.
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Title: It made me cry at the end ^^;;
Reviewed By: devin_writes_fanfiction [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, even if it was sad. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: ShadowxDemon On: July 26, 2006 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good, even if it was sad ^^. I'm not sure what I thought was going to happen, but I wasn't expecting what did. Really good, and it inspired me to write ^^. Of course, I don't want to start a new story because I'd never finish it...and you started and finished yours in what, six days? lol
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Reviewed By: Dox_san On: July 26, 2006 00:44 CDT
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YOU HAD TO DO IT DIDN'T YOU!? CRUSH MY HEART AGAIN!? ... okay! Great story, I really enjoyed it, hope you do a happy-go-lucky one someday!
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Reviewed By: Dox-san On: July 26, 2006 00:25 CDT
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I love you, though the morbid writing and the depression that you spread through your chapters made me want to kidnap a certain person and relapse pretty bad... I frigging love you! *hug*
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Reviewed By: Dox-san On: July 25, 2006 23:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.o; Meep
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Reviewed By: Dox-san On: July 25, 2006 23:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
......I don't like Alyssa... *suspicious* She's gunning for Dran... I know it... *relapse* GREAT CHAPTER WOMAN UPDATE!
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Title: *snicker*
Reviewed By: ShadowxDemon On: July 21, 2006 01:34 CDT
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It's really really good ^^. And you made Nancy's dream come true there, even if the character wasn't her. ^^ And my god, you update like a friggen monkey lol, I wish I could update like that ^^. I mean, jeez ^^
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Title: Fantasies Come True!
Reviewed By: Dox-san On: July 21, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
........yes....
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Title: Oh ohh!
Reviewed By: Dox-san On: July 21, 2006 01:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eep! I understand that you must do what you must! Stupid reporters! Hana must be saved! I'll get Browning and we'll go dig her out of prison! Keep going keep going!
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: Dox-san On: July 21, 2006 00:21 CDT
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I feel like crying! OMG UPDATE UPDATE! I can't wait to see what happens next! great twist at the end BTW. You're awesome don't ever stop writing!
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Reviewed By: Dox-san On: July 19, 2006 23:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. o.o; Oh my.... update soon!
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Title: Whoo~!
Reviewed By: ShadowxDemon On: July 19, 2006 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you, cliffhangers! I wanna know what's goin' on! It's really good n_n; You know, you can talk bad about your writing all you want, but we all know the truth. Hehehe, you should update....^(n_n)^ I wanna read mooooooore :3
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Reviewed By: Dox-san On: July 18, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you! I gave you a nine because Hana seems to remind me of someone I know... wonder who? Keep writing! I hope you do a chapter soon since the Prolouge was so interesting!
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