| "The Angel and the Assassin" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: XxDutchessxX On: May 17, 2007 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY I HOPE U UPDATE SOON! I'm really looking forward to ur new chapters!
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Reviewed By: Sexy Neko Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! Why do the good guys always think the bad guy is male? Nice chapter and can I borrow the ninja book!?!?!? Hope you update soon and can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Sexy Neko Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 01:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, you fixed it! Liked the chapter. I can't wait to see this story progress. Also, your character Laya, sounds very interesting. Hope you update soon. :D
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Reviewed By: Sexy Neko Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 20:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool! Love it. Just to let you know, chapter 3 and 4 are the same. Besides that, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up this original story. :D:D
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