| "A Birthday Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 00:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yumm I still like rereading this hot and sexy story. You are an amazing wordsmith.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 16:03 CDT
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Aww that was amazing! I this was a fantastic ending to this short story. Your pacing and use of spacing is great. Your flow and tempo for mixing physcial and emotional discriptions was wonderful. You kept me bouyed along and surfing on the crest of passion in the story. I love how you do this pairing. You are a kick ass writter and I made sure to add you to my favs so I can get an email when you add a story. Again I have enjoyed everything you have written. Thanks for the shout out:)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you finish the story because I reallllly want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah ye Gods this was a great fic. I'm super enjoying this story, the ending was off the shelf. I love your vivid use of vocab and color discriptiong. Ryu's line about berating himself for being an ass was very funny. I adore how you have written Mimori, she's very believeable and evolved. Sniff..so sad about Cougar I'm glad you mentioned him. The Snoring on the couch is very sweet and againg funny you have an incrediable grasp of humor. I loved this story and eagerly look forward to new additions. You are a great word smith.
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