| "Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: May 19, 2002 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU EVIL LIL TURD!!!!! YOU STOPED!!! why did you stop? this lil fic slave needs read fic :( need fic :(
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2002 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O
MORE.
MORE.
Wow. You're an amazing writer, I'm totally confused as to why there aren't more reviews on here!!! O_O???
Your style is very unique, and although rarely descriptive (which isn't a bad thing, mind you! It moves along but remains true, which makes it interesting and mesmerizing!) totally stays to the characters and.. well, let's just say you do an amazing job! Not just that, you totally are not KOP! I love it!
Please keep up the amazing work. |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 05, 2002 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really like how this story is going. I kind of think that the grey eyed person is Bulma, and I don't know why. She's just got that air of 'too hot too touch' about her that Bulma usually exerts. I'm surprised Bulma allowed Rsdditz to control her. Anyway, way to go with this fic, it's really REALLY good! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 19, 2002 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow! this is so good! i'm totally hooked on this fic! i REALLLLLY hope you update soon, i don't know if i can stand the wait! absolutely incredible! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: April 13, 2002 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 reviews. Poor Bulma. Don't expect many reviewers on MM. I should know. I like your story, the begining was real nice. Keep up the good work, and if nobody else reviews, I still will. :) |
Reviewed By: Nebula [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2002 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
25 visits and only one review... from the author. *sigh*
--Nebula |
Reviewed By: Kira Anne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love this fic, its kept me up for an hour, but it has to be one of the most origanal fics i've ever seen. the wording in it is wonderful and the detail is even better. you are just about everything I ever wanted to be as an author and this story is definetly going to rank in my top three. I love how Bulma has dealt with so much adversity and triumphed so much but still struggles to over come things. Her will in this story is amazing. Plus Vegeta is protrayed as being extra ruthless and that makes it so much better. The twists and turns in this fic have to be the crowning achievement. A three word summary, I love it.
~ Kira Anne ~ |
