| "Dancing into the Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: star-brella (not signed in) On: January 20, 2005 16:46 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG!!! I love this fic, not many ppl write a good yamcha like this. So heart touching, i know what u're not use to write yamcha fics either so great job on u're frist trY!!! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: v son sayian On: May 15, 2003 17:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was sweet, i'm glad that yamchu finally figured it out now he can finally start searching for his mate unless he's already found her ne? |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 08:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, I cried, I admit it. But if you tell anyone I will blast you to the next dimension. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 01, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was just beautiful. Your description of the Mating/Wedding ceremony was awesome. Yamcha's pov at times had me feeling sorry for the old warrior. The entire affair brought tears to my eyes. This fic was simply wonderful *wipes tears from her eyes*. |
