| "DBA" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Gabriel On: July 09, 2002 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story my mom used 2 sing that song 2 me when
i was little.Plz write a sequel |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 16, 2002 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the ending was so sad! well done! well done. a sequel would compliment this story perfectly. i liked vegeta's little revelation at the end about emotions making you strong. and the song was a beautiful ending, very cute. i think it really made an impact. i love that song! |
Reviewed By: Vegeta On: April 30, 2002 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great fic!
i really think you should write a sequal.
well...your not not writing it yet, what are you waiting for woman?!?!
hurry it up, get the sequal out here now!
^-^~ thanx |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 10, 2002 15:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
U should make a sequel!!!!!!!!!! This is ausome!!!!!!! |
