| "An Alternative Lifestyle" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: TheBlackRose (2 lazy to logon) On: September 18, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE LORDDESS AND MASTER, TheBlackRose, IS NOW RATING YOUR STORY!!! ... CONTINUE WRITING DAMNIT!! I wanna reeeaaaad!! *cries* CONTINUE WRITING!!! If you don't I'll sick my friend cute fuzzle bunnies on you!!! ~TBR~
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Reviewed By: Oneonta On: December 08, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is very well done. Please finish it A.S.A.P. Also, so you know where I'm coming from on Spelling, lession should be lesson.
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Reviewed By: A random person On: March 12, 2003 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this. The ending was sweet, and I believe you portrayed the emotions of the character quite well. Although... the journal thing had given away that Ben would find out, etc. It was stil beautiful, in its own unique way. |
