| "A Pocketful of Posey" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: phoenix_of_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this as well, very dramatic, and sad, and the ending simply ROCKED! Poor Light, I like how you portray him without his memories, so scared, it makes him look more human. A thing he doesn't show when he has the Death Not. Although, considering his adversary is L, I suppose he couldn't have won any other way...
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Reviewed By: DancingTurtle15 On: July 13, 2007 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was AMAZING!!!!!! totally expalins away the homoerotic chemistry between L and light...i just wish there was more to read, LOL!
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Title: L
Reviewed By: Erotic mushrooms On: July 07, 2007 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was beautiful. I loved the end, in all of it's simplicity. Write more!
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Reviewed By: taintedesire On: October 18, 2006 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *loved* the way you portrayed light's thoughts!!! You made me wanna see L's point of view as well~ :)))) Companion fic? *offers sugar cubes*
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Reviewed By: BlackRose581(too lazy to log on) On: September 29, 2006 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I like it. I like it. I like it. The writing style is pure genius. It seems to describe the very thought of a pure in-character Light/L relationship. Beautiful.
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Fwoggie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing!! Your writing is beautiful and it just flows. You write this pairing wonderfully. Thank you so much for writing this~ ^-^
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Reviewed By: Bellshadow On: August 01, 2006 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I loved the descriptive detail and portrayal of Light along with L. I also never considered that L had a final blow to strike in the form of Near and Mello. Amazing.
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