| "After the End" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: the_random_obssesor [nli] On: April 19, 2008 18:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome fic! PLEASE continue it!
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Title: Pleeeease Continue!
Reviewed By: Triva On: August 02, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely adoring this story! The plot is incredibly entertaining, endearing, and yet so original! Throughout the story, the way the characters have developed but at the same retained some of their former characteristics is superb and intriguing. Simply having read these first few chapters, I am overwhelmed with curiosity as to what will occur next. This particular fanfiction adopts a unique perspective of the interaction between the characters, such as how Harry and Ron have refused to inform Hermione of her past. Also, the indications that there might be some motive for their actions in thus is quite exciting! Please update soon. Your story is wonderful; deeper than some of the cheap romance ones, more suspenseful than many other mysteries. Your style of writing is exceedingly enjoyable, diverse in vocabulary as well as structure but not to the extent of being ridiculous or forced. I very much hope to see more of your work in other stories and particularly on this one. It truly is a gem!
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Are you gonna finish this fic or what? I like the theme you got going here,please finish! I love it!
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Title: Lady
Reviewed By: GundamLegacy On: November 21, 2006 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely love! And you must write more! The suspense, the romance, its all killing me! Please write more of this abosolutely awesome piece!
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Title: meck
Reviewed By: Mira-Ware Paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
meck meck meck meck, you must continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue and if i had the time to copy and paste more "continues" i would... okies one last time- continue.... also lovely story
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Reviewed By: Princess Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your style of writing but perhaps you should add more grammatical statements and change up your sentence styles. it would make for a more detailed story. spelling and grammar was fairly good minus all the typos. i love your originality but it happens a little fast. i do enjoy reading this story, actually i love it, but lets not get into that. overall, this is a story that i will come back to. please keep writing, i hope this was constructive.
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG.. i love it. ive never really gotten into a DM/HG pairing but i love this one. plzz plzz plzz write more. and reply.. but u need top make sure u revise it.. a lot of mistakes.. and i dont care about it but i still noticed it. jsut tellin ya *kisses* more plzz. Z >:)
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Reviewed By: Rubber Duck Commander On: August 02, 2006 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good - I haven't read a Dramione where he's depressed and she's suffering from amnesia.I'm quire surprised that Harry and Ron hasn't told her a thing yet, but I assume that she had experienced something terrible to cause the amnesia... I can't wait to read more!! ^_^ - Quack!
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