| Title: Chibi Free Holiday.......Yeah Right|
Reviewed By: andreabanez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 07:08 CST
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Your fanfic is so original,so hilarious and so cute. I mean Sanzo and his 'buddies' as chibies and wrecking your holiday, It is so original. Then Goku panicking about dust bunnies getting him and putting on a Star Wars robe, Sanzo raiding your moms make up, Gojyo being tied to a tennis ball zooming around the room, Kou and Doku being so sweet and all,(they really aren't like that in the series) Hakkai wearing a star wars costume and pretending to be Neo and having their whole wardrobe essentials with them....but what really hit me was when Goku, Sanzo and Gojyo took over the loud speakers and decided to make the song: Die You Bastards and shooting gunfire.