| "His Brother's Keeper" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Night On: September 01, 2002 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of all the PC stories I've read so far, yours is truely the best! Although I haven't read the manga series or whatever, I have seen the epi's on TV. Why does Yu have to die? I like him sooo much!
But somehow you made me think of Zero and Hiead...now I have to make them come together without making the story seem watery...so I've got some work to do! |
Reviewed By: Sakiku On: May 19, 2002 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your fanfic very much, this is the first Candidate of Goddess fanfic I've ever read and it is a great one. Please more chapters! |
Reviewed By: **Star Goddess** [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a writer myself and your story is captivating. When anyone writes fanfiction, characters happen to be OOC because thats what colors them and makes them interesting. I chose not to write about Candidate For Goddess yet because some reviewers can be harsh about telling you about what you did wrong. I am glad someone started the fanfiction off admitting that they wrote with out knowing the series. Some can make critical mistakes, but you have stayed true so far. Hope to see more soon. |
Reviewed By: **Star Goddess** [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a writer myself and your story is captivating. When you say the characters are out of character. When anyone writes fanfiction, characters happen to be OOC because thats what colors them and makes them interesting. I chose not to write about Candidate For Goddess yet because some reviewers can be harsh about telling you about what you did wrong. I am glad someone started the fanfiction off admitting that they wrote with out knowing the series. Some can make critical mistakes, but you have stayed true so far. Hope to see more soon. |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2002 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. That was realy good, and sweet. Erts is so cute(although out of the boys I like Hiead the most), and Tune and him look cute together, Ernest would ahve looked cuter with her tho.Some one needs to wriite moor Pilot Canidat Fics. |
