| "Dancing with Blood and Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: rquickle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic wwas most enjoyable. plaese write more chapters. it will be fun to see what happens next.
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Title: Thrilling
Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fanfic because it captivates the readers from the beginning and automatically draws them into this vampire world you have created. Having the characters come alive with already set personalities shows that you won't change someone beucase you feel you need to, you keep them alive with your decriptive words, which draws a picture in the readers mind. You give us the who what when where why and how (Sort of) and take us on this journey that we know will be one heck of a ride.
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This reads like an early effort, but a good one. As others have noted, it's not especially original, but I'm intrigued by your characters and want to see what will happen next, which means you're doing a good job with the plot anyway. Spelling is a real distraction, especially when you refer to Quatre. I think you mean he's "psychic", right? Other problems like "to" for "too" and "shudder" for "shutter". Does your computer have a grammar and spell check?
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_innocence [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, didn't notice my g/f's account was still signed in on here. Otherwise, I'm refered to as fujinakaheero on here. Angel is the one who wrote the story I was referring to in my last comment.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_innocence [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
eh, reminds me strongly of another story my g/f has been writing and posted on here. I'm also strongly reminded of anne rice when I read this, then again you mention here in your story. I find you could've come up with something more original then this, it just seems like a cheap knock off of a few things all put together. You know she can sue the pants off of you for using her in your story without her permission right? Did an essay on here once, she doesn't like stuff like that. If I was you i'd change that little part sooner then later.
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Reviewed By: grievous On: September 06, 2006 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I can't wait to read more. Just one thing, and it's really minor, it's "shutters" that hang outside of windows not "shudders". I always notice that because the first time I read the word, I didn't recognize it because I always thought it was shudders too! I think it's the way people pronounce it.
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Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. I hope you update soon.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness!!! I really like this fic so far. You have very good spelling & grammer (according to me anyway). Your style of writing is also very captivating and it gives me a very vivid picture from your words. I can't wait until you update again!!
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