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Reviewed By: anonymous critic On: September 22, 2006 01:10 CDT
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Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10

Comment/Review:
good job. you taped into sesshomaru's feelings well. what i recommend is to add more depth to the examples you have given. you have explained his past loses with inuyasha, try to talk about how he deeply felt in each. overall it was nice and i loved the ending. even with all the reflecting he did, he regains his composure and pride. and also by saying it in japanese tells the readers not to forget that this is in feudal japan. nice job.

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