| "'Til The Sun Shines" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: nihonjin_AEC1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 11:16 CDT
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Ne, in the sentence, " He /should/ be happy, with what he had," I don't believe there should be a comma. Now, don't go and spoil the rest of the story yet.
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Reviewed By: Misa92 On: September 11, 2006 20:40 CDT
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ahhh! my comment showed up twice! lol, i'm such a loser. hehe
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Reviewed By: Misa92 On: September 11, 2006 20:38 CDT
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ehhh your not the only one lazy about the whole job think. plus i'm swamped with sports, reading fanfics and school. not to mention watchin FMA. which i sadly say i can't watch but i will, alas, record it. *sigh* these morning practices for swimming are a real killer. as for you, you dads right lmao! 9 is pretty late... but yeah both of us will need to get some money if we intend to get the movie... omg i just realized its coming out tommorow!!!! ahhh!!! i neeed money *tears*
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Reviewed By: Misa92 On: September 11, 2006 20:36 CDT
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ehhh your not the only one lazy about the whole job think. plus i'm swamped with sports, reading fanfics and school. not to mention watchin FMA. which i sadly say i can't watch but i will, alas, record it. *sigh* these morning practices for swimming are a real killer. as for you, you dads right lmao! 9 is pretty late... but yeah both of us will need to get some money if we intend to get the movie... omg i just realized its coming out tommorow!!!! ahhh!!! i neeed money *tears*
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 15:27 CDT
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Haha, I want to see Snakes on a Plane a LOT, but seeing as I have to have a parental figure accompany me (ick) and no one wants to take me, I'll probably have to settle for the DVD rental. And what's rove? I've never heard of it. And now, something actually about the story! I liked the whole piano addition; especially the comment about Fuery trying to play. xD
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Reviewed By: nihonjin_AEC1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 10:42 CDT
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No, I wasn't thinking anything in specific; I was just wondering about her personality and such. Now where could Ed have gone? Drachema? Xing? I don't remember the other countries' names. Ishval was its own country at one point...
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Reviewed By: nihonjin_AEC1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 21:38 CDT
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Ne, sorry about the bit about the font colour mention. I was playing arount with the html tags, but it doesn't seem that the colours show. ~AEC1990
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Reviewed By: nihonjin_AEC1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like this. The shortness of time between updates is amazing, I can't wait to be able to read more. Ne, will your story tell anything directly about Aru-chan's wife? Reason behind ratings-- I tend not to like giving 'perfect scores.' However, I dislike reviewing, because some authors would rather have constructive criticism rather than something I can give-- basically 'Good Job, I really like this!' I'm not too good at being a critical reader; I can pick out grammar mistakes, which I didn't see or at least remember long enough to comment. Domou arigatou gozaimasu, Thank you for taking the time to read my review, and thank you for putting your story to words and posting it, AEC1990 P.S.: Yes, I do like playing with the font colour.
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 15:18 CDT
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Woooo!! I love that moment from Pirates of the Caribbean 2! xDD This chapter was amazing, way too many funny moments. o3o And yes, I have had the urge to hit someone before, but the last time I indulged it was when I was three. I have a lot of pent-up anger. xDD The only reason I know so much about Steve's death is because I have a lot of sources that I read for interesting news (as opposed to boring news) and they did this huge segment on the Croc Hunter. I WON CLUE! Woooooooo! And yes, I do feel special. xDD Loved this chapter, I would give you constructive criticism, but I can't find any. D: I just hope you'll reveal more about the people who want to kill Ed soon!
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Reviewed By: Uniasus(not logged in) On: September 08, 2006 11:14 CDT
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Wonderful! I love this story and have read nothing since it's finding and now. Well...except for homework. But that doesn't count, right? I'm really anxious to see Ed put his plan in action, and hopefully fit in the missing puzzle pieces, that that all depends on you. *GLARE* Goog work!
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Reviewed By: Misa92 On: September 05, 2006 20:49 CDT
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haha, this story is awesome! your buying the mangas? thats kewl, i'm gonna start doing that after i buy all the dvd's and other stuff lol. i'm gonna be soo broke. its all good though, cant wait till next update!! =]
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 18:00 CDT
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Okay, I'm NEVER going to get tired of reading the footnotes/author notes. And I can't believe the Croc Doc (my name for him, lol) is dead! By a sting ray. (A sting ray, on a reef off the coast of Australia, with a 20 cm poisonous barb! W00t! Did I win 'Clue'?) Back to the story... I think this chapter is my favorite yet by far. :3 However, was Noah being evil something you came up with? Or did I miss something when I saw the movie? Keep up the good work! :3
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Reviewed By: Sunshine Space Cadet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story and cant wait to find out what happens. please continue the story asap
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 20:32 CDT
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Hahaha! xDD It's lotsa fun writing while sugar high. And it's okay if you misspell my name-- if it makes it any easier, you can call me Phe. :3 This chapter left me hanging! D: *can't wait for the moment when Ed comes clean and tells everyone about everything* On another note... Ed and Al's female versions? *wonders how that will possibly fit in* I'm not so sure about "Edna" (hahahaa! xDD), but what about Ellis or Elise? Al-wise, I'd have to lean towards Alaina, Alisa, or Abigail. (Not mentioning all awesome names that DON'T start with E or A.)
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Reviewed By: Misa92 On: August 30, 2006 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm in love with this story PLZZZZ update soon!!!!!
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