| "The Silent Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: blaboy On: September 07, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you keep this as a Ranma/Akane pairing... oh by the way... this is a very good fic...!! 2 thumbs up for your style and creativity!!
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Reviewed By: eclipse On: February 23, 2003 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Great plot and great use and understanding of charachter. If i had genma right in front of me now.............let's just say he wouldn't be in this world anymore. Please write more............... |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 16:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
....I'm a big Ranma fan and all...but ya gotta tone Ranma down...HE ISNT INVINCIBLE...
In this story...
1) Ranma is a master of the art and master of his strength,
2) Ranma is a Musican and a Martial Artest of the highest caliber...
3) Hes Quiet and Calm,
4) Hes posibly smarter the Einstine
4) He talked Kuno out of his madness
5) He talked Nabiki out of her Gambling ways....
wheres his faults...
Dont just go on about Nekoken, cause thats not much of a character fault then a social fault.
....I know ya may like Ranma, I can tell... ya made him what every girl wants in a guy...but...wheres the real story if hes THAT strong...THAT talented..THAT smart.... whats the point of reading...
every story must have SOME confilict...otherwise why read if the charcter can do no wrongs? |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
....I'm a big Ranma fan and all...but ya gotta tone Ranma down...HE ISNT INVINCIBLE...
1) Ranma is a master of the art and master of his strength,
2) Ranma is a Musican and a Martial Artest of the highest caliber...
3) Hes Quiet and Calm,
4) Hes posibly smarter the Einstine
4) He talked Kuno out of his madness
5) He talked Nabiki out of her Gambling ways....
....I know ya may like Ranma, I can tell ya made him what every girl wants in a guy...but...wheres the real story if hes THAT strong...THAT talented..THAT smart.... whats the point of reading...
every story must have SOME confilict...otherwise why read if the charcter can do no wrongs? |
Reviewed By: zzzzzz On: August 19, 2002 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it make more soon and don't forget that soun and genma were trained under happi years befor ramna was born so try to make it a good one and accurate :) !!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: M On: August 07, 2002 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story, hope chapter 9 comes soon. |
