| "The Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 19:42 CDT
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I'm just wondering why you have the author's note posted as the first chapter. You know that was a bad move. Posting it along with the first chapter would have been better. Plus you could get in trouble with the new rules. I only say this because I don't want you to get in trouble. And are you planning to still do this story? I wanted to see the movie but I never got the chance so I have nothing to add on whether it will be good or bad based on that. I will say that if you don' have time I understand and you should hide this story until you are ready to do more with it. Otherwise...If you plan to work on this the next time I click on this story I expect you to have corrected the things I discussed. You seem to have good intentions and I don't want them to be lost to the finger waggers that don't see them for what they are. One day I hope to be a grammar goddess but I'm not so if there are any error sorry.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:34 CST
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dAMn u suck!!! you gotta write it!!!
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Sounds awesome! continue writing plz!
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Sounds awesome! continue writing plz!
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Sounds awesome! continue writing plz!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 19:26 CDT
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I haven't seen the movie so I hope it is somewhat like the movie, just so you know I don't want to see the movie just a waste of time
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 16:29 CDT
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i saw the movie so i hope it good!
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