| "When You Were Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: prelude 1221 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful, I kind of got a ball in my throat when I was reading that. I loved the spin you placed on Goku explaining that he wasn't book start but he was still intelligent.
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Reviewed By: Kurokajin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it was agreat read. I always wondered what could have been as well. I'm sure Goku loves Chi-Chi, but one has to wonder is he in love with her. Excellent fic!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicely done in chacter and not cheesy. it really makes you wonder what kind of life and love they could have..
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