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| "Inertia" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 14:47 CST
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Wow. That was intense. I think that what makes Erie an asshole is that he really is emo. I don't know how to describe this. A stuffed up head doesn't help. I love the way you focused on Tohma saying 'Yuki' instead of 'Erie' was a nice device. You had Tohma so, gah! He was cruel without intent and he knew that was how it would play out. Okay, so the razor was scary and I didn't quite understand why Tohma was calling Erie and 'dirty boy'. It doesn't matter. The things that draw the eye, the use of Erie's name, the imagery of a fairy god, the candy, etc. is wonderful. It was so sad though. *sniffle* Tohma really messed it up by getting married. Hm, maybe Tohma was afraid that a sexual relationship would mess Erie up even more. Well written. I'll have to check out more of your gravi stuff. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: SWOTBWOT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very happy to see this story posted again, because it's a Gravitation classic. Wonderful writing, evocative mood, and overall, a very powerful piece. Highly recommended to all readers out there!
| Reviewed By: Snarkyred [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! You have just made my morning by reposting this delicious piece. I don't normally leave reviews because I have a hard time conveying in words how I feel about a piece. And simply saying "Good job!" just seems so cheap. But this piece just begs me to try to write something coherent. There are not enough words to express what I feel about your writing. It raw, it's gritty, it's oh so sinful. Your stories have this nice flow and a way of drawing the reader in immediately. I left another review for "Inertia" a while back on another site, before you decided to take it home for safe keeping, so forgive me if I am repeating myself. Mostly I love how your words "taste" when I read them aloud. I know it's such a weird thing to say but it's the first feeling that comes to mind when I read your stories. Wonderful job!
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