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"Swords and Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: shinigamiduo [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2002 20:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am writing this for everyone who reads chapter one. 'Master Shear' should be Schezar. Stupid spell check doesn't like names. Enjoy anyways!
 Reviewed By: Time Lady [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 17, 2002 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
You do a great job on the grammar and spelling, and while it is original, Allen is incredibly out of character from the series. For me, a big fan of Allen, this kills the story.

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