| "Hold Me, Heal Me" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: mycha On: April 06, 2008 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm impressed! I've never seen Inuyusha but this very much gave me a good impression of it. Well written, well paced, and enough explanation for someone who doesn't know this anime to follow along, but not so much that someone who knows it would be bored with the background.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 19:07 CDT
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Seriously, I'm going to have to spend all this night complimenting your fics. When I red those chapters, I too felt (and still feel) that Kagome and Inuyasha really haven't discussed things through. We, as readers, can put the pieces together - Kikyo being the first woman he loved, not the only, Inuyasha smiling towards Kagome with soft eyes after the flower-incident (don't wanna spoil too much) and so on. Leads... but WHERE ARE THE WORDS, THE ACTIONS? GODS, stop HINTING already...!!! Eh, got carried away again. Anyway, I grover before geniouses like you; people who can fill in what we Inuyasha-freaks so badly crave... MORE FLUFF AND LIME!!!
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: InuKiKei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 02:56 CST
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I Really love it! It is EXACTLY what I was hoping to see in the manga, except for maybe the kiss.(in the manga)..maybe too soon for that,(in the manga) After everything that happened after mt hakurei supposedly InuYasha learned some big lesson...didnt he say something like.."Convinced I was the only one suffering I went off on my own and now I could lose someone else whos dear to me?" Anyway..I love the fic.
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 13:50 CST
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Awww...I love the fics that people are being inspired with from the current manga chapters! This is exactly the type of scene I would have actually loved the manga to take the time and depth to portray! Anyways back to the point, of all of these stories dealing with Inuyasha's grief I think I enjoyed this one the most. This is the first I've seen of Inuyasha in his human form and the first time I've thought about what he might feel like when he's more vulnerable to his emotions as a human. I think you did a really great job of this from all angles and it was a really satisfying read hehe. Left me smiling that's for sure :) I also think I'm getting addicted to your writing :D
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Title: Ohmigosh!
Reviewed By: Kihaku-Shiteki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmigosh! I loved this! I am a strong believer in InuKag and I just have to favorite this!
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Reviewed By: NevesElocin1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful! i'm sitting here with the biggest smirk ever. I've seen anyone take it on like that, mad props for originality. I would cry if I wasn't surrounded by people but I really want to. That was so sweet and kinda' fluffish but still great. Hope you keep up the good work. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Very cute, sweet oneshot fic. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Wolf Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! One of the best I've read... sometimes in order to realize something, you need a push. Inuyasha is a sweetheart, but he's such a dense sweetheart.. LoL. I love how you portrayed his emotions like that. Many would say its OOC, but I found it perfect, him being in his human form and losing the woman he once loved. I congratulate you and hope you continue writing fics and one-shots liket his. Much love, Wolf Blossom
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Title: Me again:P
Reviewed By: Luna18 On: August 29, 2006 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To think that Kikyou already died once..she could have at least tried not to leave everything hanging between she and Inu & Kag's relationship! Arrrgh!!*grrrr* (Heck, she didn't even free Inuyasha from his promise! Taking about a cracky old death pot zombie..) *sigh*
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Title: Overall Rating:100+:)
Reviewed By: Luna18 On: August 29, 2006 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit, when on EARTH is Inuyasha ever going to snap out of it? Not only him is suffering over Kikyou's death after all! (Thank you for pointing that out in the story also!)
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Reviewed By: Anina On: August 29, 2006 04:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, too sweet! Though Inuyasha needs to get out of his depression soon enough, this story is rather cute!~Anina-chan
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Title: oh i liked this!
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 11:36 CDT
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i loved that you did this with inu in human form. it brought a whole new dimension to this angle on the closure factor. very sweet and very much needed by all us bleeding heart iy/kag shippers! yea!
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Reviewed By: lucy107 On: August 20, 2006 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww....this is so cute..........
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Reviewed By: ssc [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 00:38 CDT
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me again... just to say that i've read ALL of your stories and i LOVED and ENJOYED them sooo much!!! they are deliciously wicked!!! Please my future past soon it's a great story i'm dying to know what happening next
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Reviewed By: ssc [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 00:36 CDT
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Hey this one is something i so badly needed 'cause of the lack of update from the manga, it's interesting what's going on why sesomaru and rin, but it's killing me not to know how are thing with inu and kagome... Great shot you are one of a hell of a writer, i read two of your other stories and in fasinated!!!
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