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"Guardian" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]
 Reviewed By: methakamon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2003 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please continue this fic. it's really good so far and im completely in love with it. please keep going. ;D
 Reviewed By: shaddeh [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 22, 2003 08:25 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Meep...I've owed you this review for quite awhile now. :X Be merciful, I've been gearing up for finals week. Well...heh...here I am? *hides* >.>

I feel guilty about abandoning Jecht like this (the poor baby :p), but you're really doing an awesome job with this Serra/Auron pairing. Just keep going as you are and taking your time with introducing it and it'll be great. ^^

Wonderful job as always~! Ergh, school calls again. e.x; Good luck on your next chapter ^^ I hope it comes swiftly for you! Great work!

~Shad
 Reviewed By: shaddeh [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 02, 2002 19:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dammit, woman! :D

I'm strongly for the Jecht/Jecht's wife pairing, but you're making a relationship with Auron very plausible here, and I'm not sure I like that :P Strike that, I do, and your writing is fabulous as always, it's just that I've got mixed feelings about the un-Jechtness of it all. ^_^v (But you make it so realistic, I could see a Serra/Auron, too...oh, I'm torn! :P)

Incredible job on this. Keep it up! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Shadowreborn [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2002 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, i am blowen away at how good of a story this is. First of all you have hit on auron really staying true to him. Something most writers on here just don't do. Also i loved how you would swith view points like you did i think that was one of the best parts of the story. I hope there is more to it because i would be happy to read it. Good job you have talent i wish i had. Thank you for the well done story
 Reviewed By: shaddeh [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2002 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Have I mentioned I adore this fic? :D I hope you won't mind that I placed this review here instead of FF.net...

Beautiful, simply beautiful. Mastery of the pen...er...keyboard, heheh...Anyway, originality ahoy!

I was so moved in particular by Tidus' little interlude in Chapter 6. But I'm right here -- Oh lord, that tugged at my heartstrings so wonderfully.

You must get more out soon. PLEASE. ^_^;;

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