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| "Family Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Lady Jay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 21:24 CDT
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haha, your reviewers are havin' so much fun contemplating and imagining the twists of this story, doesn't that just make you so proud?? :) oh, and what is an Oedipus complex?
| Title: Of course not, don't be ridiculous!
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, the anal retentive boys are about to appear. That should be fun. And, of course 'Fluffy' can't just go around killing hanyous that have Naraku's DNA in them or he would have to eliminate all his descendants, not to mention Shippou and Kana's, as well. I'm assuming that you will be including them in this little tale in the near future. Just think of the possibilities; a demon with the mischief of the father and the spying abilities of the mother. chuckles Should either go into corporate espionage or tabloid photography. Anyway, keep up the good work. Take it easy, Fyrloche.
| Reviewed By: Lady Jay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 12:39 CDT
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lol! do I sense some sort of incestuousness with Midi and Aoimaru?? haha, sry, i couldn't resist. I know dey both have mates, yes... but yup, freakiness, she might be from Naraku!! I bet she's not even from Inu and Kags' line, she's probably a NAraku/Kikyo mix!! but wait, if she's Naraku/Kikyo, she wouldn't have any Dog in her, would she?? and you never said if she was an inuyoukai or not! *gasp* I luv the mysteries... :)
| Reviewed By: Lady Jay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 12:27 CDT
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oh, now we got mysteries... what happened so Aki doesn't want to fly?? what exactly happened with this terrible thingie trapped under Mt Fuji?? (or whatever it's called) and, more importantly, is Fluffy ever going to get some???!!!!! *evil, hentaish grin* lol of course, what I meant to say, will he ever get some-one to heat the water for his tea... ;) I am totally not a pervert. *nose starts growing* Hey!! damn pinocchio complex!!!
| Reviewed By: Bre`Auna Kemp aka: Tanaga Mannie_bre On: August 21, 2006 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it plz update soon i can't wait to finish reading ur story keep up the great work
| Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 08:31 CDT
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Another one to stick on my favorites page....
| Title: Great set-up
Reviewed By: Fyrloche-nsi On: August 21, 2006 07:31 CDT
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Sounds like you've got a great set-up started. Of course, we all know that the three terrors of Naraku and Kikyo's butt will show up sometime. I look forward to more.
| Reviewed By: Lady Jay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 22:24 CDT
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oo, I love the concept!!! Thanks so much for continuing this series, btw. I was getting bored of my other reading material. :)
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